Death City. Chapter one.
"The Slaughter of The Black Bloods."
Most anything or anyone can enter the giant metal gates.
Humans, angels, Spirits, Freaks, or any oddity known....or unknown.
The city was actually quite a peaceful place to live.
There are two main 'species' of human here.
One, Just regular humans, the ones that populate the earth. The other,
a combination of humans and all oddities combined. They have abilities unlike other humans. They are called 'Black bloods' for their blood is very dark.
One could distinguish a human from a Black Blood by looking at their waists.
Two Black stripes are placed vertically on each side.
These two species have been living peacefully among each other for more than
seven decades.
It was rumored that a Black Blood released the Madness on The earth.
The Supposedly Final resting place of the horrible creature was said to be Underneath
Death City.
when it was announced black bloods were the cause, It started a Cross-species war.
Or....That's what they called it.
Black Bloods are being Decapitated, Murdered and Driven out of the city.
There are only a few female Black Bloods left...And rumor has it there are no males left at all.
Maybe they were smart and ran away before the Slaughter Began.
And now it seems the world is in complete chaos.
Many people are afraid, especially Black Bloods.
If there are any left...
Rachel watched two young girls run down the seemingly endless streets.
BANG!! BANG!! BANG!!! BANG!!!
The gunshots echoed throughout the city, Pedestrians ran off streets into over-crowded Restaurants, houses and Shops.
These were executioner's gun shots. The poor girls never stood a chance.
Rachel walked over to their Bodies.
Their faces wore a look of Shock and fear. Tears trickled down their cheeks, as the bullet's poison began taking action.
Their skin started to dissolve and their blood boiled.
The poison ate them alive.
Rachel couldn't help but turn away. The horrible vision burned itself into the her memory.
How horrible! Whoever could create such horrendous weapons?! And knowing they will be used so violently.....They do not carry a soul!
When a large silhouette came into view, Rachel's muscles tightened.
She immediately Walked away.
Once out of view, Rachel as she was called, turned around and watched the large 'human' Beast carry the burning piles of flesh into the night, leaving a few scattered limbs behind.
She turned her back to the scene and hurried down the pebbled road.
The city was paved in shades of dark Amethyst, Navy, Emerald, Shade and some walls are stained with Dark Blood.
Very Dark Blood.
ALMOST Black.















Comments
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Oh please, that was just one of the millions of bad ideas i've had today
>w<
i fixed a few grammer mistakes, What was your favorite part?
And i think i'll draw a picture of Rachel now ^-^
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Do you remember when I was a child?
I remember. We were so close, and I was so
happy when I was with you.
Why did you leave me alone?
I waited for you.
From Dawn til dusk.
You never came.
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Oh please, that was just one of the millions of bad ideas i've had today
I didn't know you were a writer, too.
Anyways, very, very good job so far. It's very intriguing, and has a lot of Steven King style feel in it. There's a lot of small errors here and there, but they don't detract from the story at hand.
Seriously, though. I'm impressed. You're a better writer then a lot of others I've read on this site
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They say that in time, that moment...That single person comes for you. And I have found that person. Audrey + Steve forever
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Trance Into Distant Skies...
I just got into writing,and this could be considered something for practice.
Then in the future when i am better, I'll fix all those errors.
Some people say it's because i read alot, you'll never see me with books, but you will see me on the computer reading stories of other deviants.
I need to make comics though, I'm better at those.
But i'm trying to write now too >.<
Thank you for your compliments!!
I don't think i deserve the, though!
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Do you remember when I was a child?
I remember. We were so close, and I was so
happy when I was with you.
Why did you leave me alone?
I waited for you.
From Dawn til dusk.
You never came.
I'm working on things still...
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Do you remember when I was a child?
I remember. We were so close, and I was so
happy when I was with you.
Why did you leave me alone?
I waited for you.
From Dawn til dusk.
You never came.
And you're welcome
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They say that in time, that moment...That single person comes for you. And I have found that person. Audrey + Steve forever
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Trance Into Distant Skies...
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