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Death city. Chapter 7. by ~Nikki1705:iconNikki1705:



."Hime".

A small smirk found it's way across Senni's face, as she crouched next to her
Classmate's corpse. She had really outdone herself this time.
To her, it was a complete shame to miss out on the face of the first person who noticed  it.
Her limbs began to tremble with excitment.
After a few moments, she heaved a sigh.

"I don't regret doing this, My poor poor classmate. You got what you deserved and there's not a thing
You can do about it!"
Senni commented to herself in a somewhat child-ish tone, then she giggled queitly.
A small sting interupted her amusement. She flinched when she felt something wet, slimy and long wallowing
into her skin. She quickly put her fingers to just bellow her ankle and yanked a skinny, long
worm-like creature out of her skin. It and her fingers dripped with blood.
This was nothing like an ordinary worm. Nothing at all. This small parasite was nothing
more than a Leech.
In Death city, these things lurk under the streets, only coming out when a scent of blood filled the air.
Senni brought it up to her face, holding it by it's tiny throat.
It was a small one, and it must have been pretty desprate to go for live prey.

"You almost got me little one." She murmered, staring into the little thing's hollow black eyes.
It's white pupil stared back at her.
After a few moments, a thin smile formed over her face.
An Idea started to form in her mind.


At about an hour after midnight, Senni reached her home.
It was nestled at the top of a small hill, only a quarter of a mile away from her highschool.
The house was very big, dark and all around Creepy.
It gave out a haunting aura, that could send a chill down any spine.
Any...except Senni's.
Two golden eyes peirced the darkness.
As Senni made her way up the stairs, two small arms wrapped around her stomach, clinging tightly.

"Sister...."
A weak voice came from Hime. The little girl who thought of Senni as a sister, even though they weren't
biologicly related.
Senni was something Hime thought worth protecting.

"Hime." Senni's voice was firm, it broke threw to the little girl and she immidently released her grip.
She turned around slowly, directing her gaze to Hime.
"You need to get inside. NOW."

Hime emitted no responce, but obeyed and walked up the steps.
They entered the darkness together. Senni clenched her left fist harder, making her knuckles turn white.
Small droplets of blood fell to the floor.
©2009 ~Nikki1705
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Author's Comments

I KNOW there are some spelling mistakes.
I will fix them later.
I wanted to introduce Karen....but I'll leave that for the next chapter.
Wow.
Seventh Chapter.
Well, I do hope you like it, And you'll see what Senni did to Felicity's body next...
It's not going to be pretty!
And also...some of those Man-eating Leeches can grow to be like....7 foot long. Maybe 8.

ALL OF THE CHARACTERS SO FAR BELONG TO ME.

NO STEALING.

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:iconinvaderstellar:
Interesting... Senni reminds me of one of my favorite comics, "Johnny the Homicidal Maniac". Johnny is just like Senni. The should get married, XD.

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:aww:
:iconcountandra:
Noooooo!! Don't end already!! T_T
Awesome chapter, by the way!! :D :glomp:
I :heart: Senni so much! She's truly a very kickass person ^^
Hime is pretty cool too (and very quiet O_O) :love:

:fear: Damn, I hate leeches T.T

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:iconviper-girl19:
:O
darn you cliff hanger AND leeches! D:
great! this is definately an amazing story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

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Random Dude: But they–
Frankie: KILLED MUFASA!
Alek: IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT SETH! IF YOU WERE HALF THE KING MUFASA WAS-
Seth: *strikes him*I’M TEN TIMES THE KING MUFASA WAS!
Simba: Dont use my fathers name in vain!
Ammy: HOLY GUACAMOLY A LION!
:iconnikki1705:
Don't worry, I'll try and have the next chapter up by tonight. :D
Thank you, it was hard to think up! ((And i had to rewrite it a million times!! D: ))

Thank you!
I'm so glad you like Senni so much :love:
But wait until you see what she's does when people make her angry. :O_o:

There are going to be a lot of chapters featuring her.
And her family too. I'm coloring the drawing of her I did.

And wait until you meet the REST of her family.
And her maid with all the spikes through her body.
It's going to be so fun!!

Trust me.
The Leeches get worse.
You'll read about how big they can grow when Senni gets that 'someone'.

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Do you remember when I was a child?
I remember. We were so close, and I was so
happy when I was with you.
Why did you leave me alone?
I waited for you.
From Dawn til dusk.
You never came.
:iconnikki1705:
I'll post it tonight.
I'm glad you like it so much!
What do you think about the characters so far?

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Do you remember when I was a child?
I remember. We were so close, and I was so
happy when I was with you.
Why did you leave me alone?
I waited for you.
From Dawn til dusk.
You never came.
:iconnikki1705:
Senni's to young to get married, and she likes someone else already ^^; Too bad for Johnny! :rofl: Jk Jk.

I'm glad you think it is interesting!
I'll make it more and more as we progress.

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Do you remember when I was a child?
I remember. We were so close, and I was so
happy when I was with you.
Why did you leave me alone?
I waited for you.
From Dawn til dusk.
You never came.
:iconinvaderstellar:
Okay, lolz. Cool~!

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:aww:
:iconviper-girl19:
yay! :D
i think the characters are characters are great. Especially Senni because it shows that she has many different sides to her!

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Random Dude: But they–
Frankie: KILLED MUFASA!
Alek: IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT SETH! IF YOU WERE HALF THE KING MUFASA WAS-
Seth: *strikes him*I’M TEN TIMES THE KING MUFASA WAS!
Simba: Dont use my fathers name in vain!
Ammy: HOLY GUACAMOLY A LION!
:iconnikki1705:
Really?
Explain so.


((Thanks so much :love:

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Do you remember when I was a child?
I remember. We were so close, and I was so
happy when I was with you.
Why did you leave me alone?
I waited for you.
From Dawn til dusk.
You never came.

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